Past midnight,
Little lights shine all over the sky
Reminding me of the sparkle in your eyes
A moon,
the shape of your smile.

A soothing breeze blows
Bracing my skin
As you did long ago.
Soon it turns cold
Just like us.

Thank you for bearing with me and reading it! That was my first attempt ever at writing a poem.
I know its terrible for a start. But if I need to write something good, I’ll have to start with something as bad!

Oh and by the way, that has nothing to do with my life!

Any comments and feedback are more than welcome.


32 thoughts on “Us

  1. If you think it’s terrible than you need to reconsider your opinion.:) it’s quite good & rhythm comes as you write, also not every poetry I’ve read is rhythmic.::)

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  2. where is your place?christmas adichu policho?mba kazinju purathu pokanano plan?discard this if you don’t want to share such things ok? 🙂


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